I play wow on RP realm, this i just the backstory for my character and my partner in crime, Emberwulf a hunter. Rough draft so there's errors but eh

Storeh time

I finished reading it and I like it, but I have to say it's a little confusing at first. Jumping from perspective to perspective. The story itself was really good though. I'm not sure how to say what I want on changing the perspective, but either way it's still good.

like i said in WoW already, would love to hear more of it

I play wow on RP realm, this i just the backstory for my character and my partner in crime, Emberwulf a hunter. Rough draft so there's errors but eh

Storeh time

I wondered about that, which is why I tried to make the fonts different.

Yeah. The font certainly helped. I think, what I wanted to say earlier was to divide it up if you want to take two different perspectives. The first 5 paragraphs could be combined for each perspective. As in, one guys story to this point, then the other gals story . Then they converge when they meet for the first time. At which point you could go back and forth without as much confusion.

I may do that, i didn't really edit it much..just kinda typed it up and threw it out there for ideas.

haha

Just my ideas I really like the story. Would be nice to hear some more Tale's of two Tails.